Poetry Poetry

Discussion in 'Film, Music, Literature, Art' started by Lupine, Aug 3, 2017.

  1. Lupine

    Lupine Guest

    So any budding Poets about? I used to write stuff so many moons ago now. But thought I'd share a couple.

    Hazy Days

    The days drift on and on
    But there must be an end.
    I see her face in every crowd;
    Hear her voice in every word.

    Images of snatched moments we had
    Drift like snowflakes through my heart.

    I never knew why she left,
    I guess she's never gone.
    But I know there's a hole in my heart
    Where she used to be.


    Fireflies

    From on high I watch the lights below
    They shine like so many fireflies
    Their patterns push out to light the dark
    I wonder of the dreams
    That those below are having
    Their lives unaware of my passing

    As I watch the land slip by
    My thoughts reach upto heaven
    My mind wanders like the clouds
    But slowly I tire and fall into slumber
    My mind dreams like those below
    But onwards I always go..

     
  2. Heather

    Heather Well-Known Member FCN Regular

    Very Nice Lupine
     
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  3. Lupine

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    Thanks Heather :)
     
  4. Kelsey12

    Kelsey12 Well-Known Member

    There once was a man from Nantucket...

    I used to write. Even got published, twice. But that was so long ago, and I was in a better place then. I don't know that I have it in me these days. Maybe I'll look through the closet this weekend & see what I can find... see if there's anything worth sharing.
     
  5. Lupine

    Lupine Guest

    Yeah I'm the same, these are old pieces.
     
  6. AmberDoll

    AmberDoll Guest

    Can you recite that while im sat on your face :)
     
  7. Lupine

    Lupine Guest

    Not so it could be heard I doubt :rolleyes:
     
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  8. AmberDoll

    AmberDoll Guest

    Twitchy Tongue Syndrome :)
     
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  9. AmberDoll

    AmberDoll Guest

    i don't want a divorce
    because your hung like a horse
     
  10. MeganB

    MeganB Well-Known Member FCN Regular

    Money:
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    Yayy!!! The place where I belong.... Poetry!!!<3
     
  11. MeganB

    MeganB Well-Known Member FCN Regular

    Money:
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    Loved you work... Love your work.. and will love it in the future.....
     
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  12. Lupine

    Lupine Guest

    Thanks Meg. See more than just a hot guy in uniform. Have smarts as well ;)
     
  13. MeganB

    MeganB Well-Known Member FCN Regular

    Money:
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    Haha!!!! I'm up for it Lupine xxxx
     
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  14. Lupine

    Lupine Guest

    Looking forward too your work then Meg.
     
  15. MeganB

    MeganB Well-Known Member FCN Regular

    Money:
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    My love,

    There are days when I lay awake like an owl.
    Alone on my bed, I wondered...
    " Why am I so lucky...? "
    You're just like one of those prince charming of fairly tales.
    Saved me from the troubles.
    Stood behind me to catch each fall of mine.
    Made me laugh with your silly jokes.
    Turned me red and blushiee with those whispers of yours.
    All my teary nights became beautiful memories.
    Changed my nightmares to beautiful dreams.
    You made my life so complete.
    So now that I have you for myself.
    I know for sure.
    That......
    I am yours forever and ever.


    Love,
    MB
     
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  16. MeganB

    MeganB Well-Known Member FCN Regular

    Money:
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    There you go!!!!
     
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  17. Lupine

    Lupine Guest

    Wow Meg, very intimate. Nicely laid out as well. Runs nicely.
     
  18. MeganB

    MeganB Well-Known Member FCN Regular

    Money:
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    Thank you xxxx
     
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  19. Lupine

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    So new piece or an old one? I find it hard recently to write stuff of any length and often stick to Haiku.
     
  20. MeganB

    MeganB Well-Known Member FCN Regular

    Money:
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    It's new ... I write on Wattpad.. so it's one of those
     
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