Hum.. I loved it....I was being a punk
See the last line.. I was saying you named the chapter sniff...
I'm hoping your not offended. I was tired and it seemed a little joke
I love your writing. Please, dont make this the last one because I made a poor joke...
Appologies... OGR
No need to, humour is a writer's tool too.
I got the joke.
I usually just post erotica, but I guess I was rather impressed how that 'death scene' panned out and wanted to share.
Next time, I'll aim for the groin, not the emotions.
Ls x