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I get what your saying about Fcn being as it is, and I'm sure what you've treat us to will certainly get a lot of attention lol. But I quite liked the fact that she knows she's different, but aspires to be seen and loved as ( for want of better words) a real woman. With all the wants, needs and desires that that entails.
I'd have enjoyed reading the previous chapter to be fair. I enjoy good action pieces and I'd have liked to see how you made the transition between them both.