RP Turned Story

Insomniac

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So, I decided to take a roleplay session I had with a very good friend and turn it into something I could share. Comments, criticisms and the like are welcome.

The evening was well under way. We had enjoyed a nice meal and curled up on the couch to watch a movie. While I periodically got distracted by the pictures, you always found ways to snap me out of my hypnosis to lure me in for a slow make out session to remind me what was truly important in the moment.

As the movie wrapped up, you rose from the couch only to turn to face me and straddle my lap on the couch. Wrapping your arms over my shoulders, you wiggle your hips a little as you lean in and place your lips on mine. Instinctively, our lips part, tasting each other and savouring it. You suck on my lip slightly as you draw back.

“No more distractions...” you say.

My hands grip your ass and draw you against me. “Agreed.”

“So...” you say, leaning in close, “Is there anything you'd like to focus on?”

“I don't know, is there a sequel to that movie?” I ask with a playful smirk.

You smack me in the chest. “Come on, really?” you say in mock exasperation. “Surely you can focus for a few minutes...”

“You want to see me focused?”

The look in my eyes caught your attention. “I would.”

I study your gaze. You're challenging me...

“All right. I want you to go upstairs and pull out your toys. I want to see the kind of things that excite you.”

“OK... what are you going to do?”

With a impish grin, I reply, “Focus.”

I watch you climb the stairs and once you are upstairs, I mentally prepare. Stowing my easy-going joker away, I steel myself to remain focused. Once I have my scatterbrain under control, I head upstairs to your bedroom.

You stand by the side of your bed, your toys arranged for my inspection. While I was preparing downstairs, you had taken the time to change into a satin camisole. I walked in and took in the sight of you in lingerie. Running a hand up your side, I feel a distinct lack of panty and bra strap edges. Pulling your body against mine and whisper into your ear. “I see you've dressed for the occasion...”

“Of course! You approve?”

“Very much,” I say, running my fingers over your chest. Glancing toward the toys on the bed, I meet your gaze. “May I take a look?”

You nod with a bit lip, hoping I make a choice quickly.

Instead I examine every piece meticulously, weighing each against their peers as my preferred weapon of choice. I find a particularly dong with choice girth and set it aside. As I reach into the toy pile again I say “Take it off...”

You look back at me playfully. “Are you sure? I thought you liked it...”

“I do...” I hold up a bundle of rope, “But at the moment, it's in my way...”

Realization dawns on you and you comply, peeling off the lingerie and standing before me. I walk over to you, my eyes wandering over your naked skin. I can sense your self-consciousness, but I take my time walking slowly around you. I drag the end of the rope across your chest and over your shoulders to your back. I draw the rope back and whip it across your ass, eliciting a surprised yelp.

You hold your wrists out to me, asking to be bound, but I shake my head and lean in close. “Behind your back.”

Slightly reluctantly, you put your wrists behind your back. Drawing out the rope, I wrap your wrists tightly together and cinch them together. My arms pull your body against mine and I whisper in your ear. “Now you're mine to focus on.”

My hands tightly grip your breasts, pinching your nipples in my fingertips, as I grind my cock into your ass. My lips taste your neck as my hands roam your body, exploring you as I see fit. I move in and devour your body one moment, only to step back and watch you with an intense gaze the next. My hand finds your ass with a hard smack. I pin you to the wall, kissing you hard before dropping to my knees and tasting the arousal on you, my tongue on your clit and my fingers buried deep in you.

I stand up, still teasing you and getting you to squirm. I can see patches of red skin where a spanking or rough handling glows on your pale skin. Meeting your eyes, I say “I think I need some attention. Bend over the end of the bed.”

With a smile, you walk over to the foot of the bed and lay face down onto the bed, raising your ass toward me. “Will this work?”

“You are a good girl. Lets see if we can't drive some of that good out of you...”

I smack your presented ass hard, bringing the red back up to the surface. After each smack to the ass I strip off a piece of clothing. Once I've gotten rid of obstacles, I walk over to the dong I set aside earlier and return to behind you. I tease your pussy with just the tip initially, but then press the toy fully into you. Slowly at first, I draw the cock stand-in out before driving it back in twisting it with each thrust.

Your muffled cries of pleasure are screamed into the mattress as I'm jackhammering you with the toy, occasionally stopping enough to smack your ass again. Then I'm gone...

With the toy still buried deep inside of you, I walk around the side of the bed and present my cock to you, which you turn your head to hungrily accept. I thrust into your mouth, as your tongue works over the tip and I wait until nearly the breaking point before pulling away, your saliva clinging to my shaft.

Walking back to the pile of toys, I grab a bottle of lube and step in behind you. Nudging the dong back inside of you, I lube up my cock and use the amount on my hand to tease your ass with my fingers. With some teasing of my fingers and the fake cock deep inside of you, I plant my hard dick against your ass and press in slow.

The sense of fullness draws a moan from your lips, but you manage to relax enough to let me bury myself into you down to the hilt. After a few slow thrusts to test the waters, my hand grips the rope that binds your wrists and use it for leverage as I pound deep into your ass, fast and hard. The rocking of my hips continually jars the dong in your pussy, giving it to you from two sources.

Your cries of pleasure, the sound of skin and skin and the tightness of your ass around my cock proves too much and a blast of cum erupts from me, filling your ass in forceful bursts. Once I'm spent, I fall back on legs nearly too weak to carry me. I untie your wrists before collapsing onto the bed beside you, out of breath.
 
That IS hot. From a strictly technical standpoint it could go from a 6.5 to a 10 with another pass at editing. Somethings that stood out to me as a writer:
Instances of over-use...the word together in this example, "Drawing out the rope, I wrap your wrists tightly together and cinch them together" this sentence would be great without the second use of 'together'.
And for some reason this bothers me, "Slowly at first, I draw the cock stand-in out before driving it back in twisting it with each thrust." I think it would read so much easier as "Slowly at first I draw out the cock stand in before plunging it back in twisting it with each thrust" or alternatively "...withdraw the cock stand in"
I dont know why I wrote all this out but it's a bizzare passion of mine and you seem to really care about your writing. Other than that, better than most for key things like pacing and detail.
✌Peace out man!
 
Thanks for the feedback, Eddy. I'll definitely have to be more mindful of repetition in future writings. I've written stories in many genres, but strangely enough, erotica seems to be a very tricky one to get right.
 
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