Literature BB77 Writing Thread

Hervy said:
Brilliant, as always. Touching, for anybody who knows you, even a little.
Quite authentic, and thought material : aren't we all books, in the end, seeking for a title ?
Great job. I wish I was able to write that masterfully. I'm proud of your artistic development <3
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❤️
 
Two poems stand out for me. Two poems stir feelings deep inside and i thank you for that so much.
A Rose in the Dark and Monster.

We are all monsters deep inside but the chosen few understand even a monster can feel, even a monster can love, and even a monster can care and nurture those who dare to look past the outer shell and into our hearts and souls.

Love Vicki
 
Vicki_Wolf said:
Two poems stand out for me. Two poems stir feelings deep inside and i thank you for that so much.
A Rose in the Dark and Monster.

We are all monsters deep inside but the chosen few understand even a monster can feel, even a monster can love, and even a monster can care and nurture those who dare to look past the outer shell and into our hearts and souls.

Love Vicki
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Thank you for those very kind words Vicki. And yes, we do have a some monster inside us. Some nearer the surface than others, but as you say, we can still love and care for those around us. ❤
 
BadBabe77 said:
This is the first of a three part series of poems, and possibly the saddest one i have ever written. Even now reading it back is a struggle.

The Broken Doll

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YyJTfF6YEZmnaDIGVGYQx2LFuEq7lE5zchjHoAwPf5w/edit?usp=sharing
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BadBabe77 said:
Part two of the series. And yes this is just a hard to read as the first one.

Left Alone

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VH6QQUhIXya3Z7Tx9iPjNhnMdxrjY4gfe-w0wkZ1E5A/edit?usp=sharing
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BadBabe77 said:
And finally part three. Still fills me with emotion, but for different reasons. The people who this refers to know who they are.

The Forgotten Toys

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yLmHC5JZoX_d1H2XARpGRi3s5FztOLRipfcSgVPJ0ik/edit?usp=sharing
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I reread the first one and it still hits me just as hard as the first time. I love this series as painful as the first two are to read I still love it. The third gives me hope and makes me feel better. That even as low as you can get there's a helping hand to show you kindness again. To tell you that you're not alone and that they're there for you ❤❤
 
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I found this old poem of yours in a conversation. You said you lost alot of your old works so here is one that I liked and captured a feeling especially the last two verses.

I like sex, I like the fun and the games
I enjoy being the animal the strong word tames
I like the feel of the cold chains that bite
I enjoy being spread-eagled and held tight
I like being naked next to your clothed form
Although most of these go against the norm

But for all of these kinky desires
It is you that raises my inner fires
I have a passion that makes my blood hot
Warmed even more when under a tight knot
But this is nothing with out you there
And it makes no difference if I am bare

Of all the things that I enjoy
I do know that you are not a toy
Never would I ask anything of you
Something that you wouldn’t want to do
Yes, I get excited by the leather and steel
But a cuddle from you is far more real

So, I say this as this verses last line
You don’t have to tie me up with twine
Your hugs are warming to my very core
As your love into me does pour
I am tied already, my heart is bound
I am here for you, waiting to be found

-BadBabe77
 
Vicki_Wolf said:
I found this old poem of yours in a conversation. You said you lost alot of your old works so here is one that I liked and captured a feeling especially the last two verses.

I like sex, I like the fun and the games
I enjoy being the animal the strong word tames
I like the feel of the cold chains that bite
I enjoy being spread-eagled and held tight
I like being naked next to your clothed form
Although most of these go against the norm

But for all of these kinky desires
It is you that raises my inner fires
I have a passion that makes my blood hot
Warmed even more when under a tight knot
But this is nothing with out you there
And it makes no difference if I am bare

Of all the things that I enjoy
I do know that you are not a toy
Never would I ask anything of you
Something that you wouldn’t want to do
Yes, I get excited by the leather and steel
But a cuddle from you is far more real

So, I say this as this verses last line
You don’t have to tie me up with twine
Your hugs are warming to my very core
As your love into me does pour
I am tied already, my heart is bound
I am here for you, waiting to be found

-BadBabe77
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OMG... lol. That is a old one indeed. And possibly one I don't have the original to. Thank you Vicky for saving that and for posting it. ❤
 
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