Poetry Poetry

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  1. witchygirl

    witchygirl Well-Known Member FCN Regular

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    Same.. but i wrote alot to deal with the pain of my last relationship.. in a much better place now x
     
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  2. SweetLesGirl

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    To the 2 Woman i love with all my heart ♡

    the universe in your eyes

    Brighter than the blinding flares of the sun, shimmering outward with power of thousands of stars
    yet comforting
    yet soft.
    Filled with oceans crashing and wild, turning over ships, rushing under a powerful storm.
    yet still
    yet calm.
    Filled with wonder and curiosity, yearning for the unknown, desperate for enlightenment
    yet wise
    yet content.
    Eyes so wide, so deep, filled with delicate roses, the power of mighty warriors, elegant as Venus's flowing dress, filled with souls of thousands, with passion, with yearning, with desire.
    Filled with beauty
    Filled with you.

    -September Rose
     
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  3. SweetLesGirl

    SweetLesGirl Well-Known Member FCN Regular

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    Wonderful
     
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  4. Hawkeye100

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    Sitting alone
    Palms massaging forehead
    Pressure builds in temples
    Hunched
    Broken
    Falling
    Sharp in take of laboured breath
    Followed by perpetual sigh
    "Fuck" the only audible noise whispered to an echo of two minutes before
    Sitting alone
    Chin comes to rest on chest
    Eyes open but closed to what they see
    Slumped
    Damaged
    Numb
    Thoughts turn inwards
    The need to know the need to feel
    Countafiet smiles hide the truths from those who are blind
    Sitting alone
    Lost in silence yet ears ring to life's white noise
    Disorientated
    Cold
    Jaded
    Turning to face myself
    Unknown is the mirrored stare
    Like looking through a shuttered window
    It's dark in here
    Lost
    Blind
    Stumbling
    My only guide
    The bastard black dog.


    Hawkeye100 25/10/18

    Please excuse any spelling
     
  5. Lupine

    Lupine Guest

    Nicely done chap..
     
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  6. Pistil

    Pistil Guest

    Powerful stuff. Not easy to share. Thanks.
    I really like how you play with space in this poem. Alternating rhythms visually, emphasizing words by isolating them. Very effective.
    And the ending lines cascading to that final image. Works.
    Thanks again.
    Please don't doubt that you're a writer - things worth saying and your unique voice for sayin.
     
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  7. Hawkeye100

    Hawkeye100 Well-Known Member

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    Thankyou so much fellers that means a lot to me :)
     
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  8. SweetLesGirl

    SweetLesGirl Well-Known Member FCN Regular

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    Not much of a poem but...

    Your skin is like a music page
    Over which my fingertips play
    It's a melody of passion
    Which flow like warm liquid
    Where my trembling lips touch
    And quivering limps
    Tangle into a passionate tango
    It's a melody of love
    An explosion of harmony's
    When two body's comes together
    With passion and beating hearts
    Until they reach a crescendo
    Of ecstasy and pure delight...
     
  9. Pistil

    Pistil Guest

    This is much of a poem. Actually.
    Thank you for sharing your words, your feelings, your love.
     
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  10. SweetLesGirl

    SweetLesGirl Well-Known Member FCN Regular

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  11. SweetLesGirl

    SweetLesGirl Well-Known Member FCN Regular

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    Let your body be my canvas
    To paint on in all shades of love
    Landscapes of passionate emotions
    Let me paint you into my soul
    With my tongue in warm wet lines
    Over the curves of your full round breast
    Let my tongue sweep over the contours
    Of your stomach like a paintbrush
    Allow me to paint my love
    In shades of red and yellow
    Over every delicious curve
    Let my lips be the shades of
    Heat against your skin
    Let the night be the witness
    To the exploding of colours
    Of my love on your body
    So that it can leave a print
    Behind onnthe sheets of my bed
    As proof of our night of passion
     
  12. Pistil

    Pistil Guest

    Wow. Gorgeous. Beautifully said. And very sexy.
    The Art of Making Love ...
     
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  13. SweetLesGirl

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    She Walks in Beauty
    BY LORD BYRON (GEORGE GORDON)
    She walks in beauty, like the night
    Of cloudless climes and starry skies;
    And all that’s best of dark and bright
    Meet in her aspect and her eyes;
    Thus mellowed to that tender light
    Which heaven to gaudy day denies.

    One shade the more, one ray the less,
    Had half impaired the nameless grace
    Which waves in every raven tress,
    Or softly lightens o’er her face;
    Where thoughts serenely sweet express,
    How pure, how dear their dwelling-place.

    And on that cheek, and o’er that brow,
    So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,
    The smiles that win, the tints that glow,
    But tell of days in goodness spent,
    A mind at peace with all below,
    A heart whose love is innocent

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  14. SnoopSlimes

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    Such a beautiful poetry! Thank you for this my lollipop *hugsss*
     
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  15. ClassyCass

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    Im reading everyones poetry on here, and its beautiful!! Seems only fair to share 2 of my favorites I wrote. (Please keep in mind English is not my first language :D )

    Fairytale

    I wrote you a fairytale
    of love, happiness, full of hope..
    Dragons, witches,
    elves and midgets.
    A princess, a knight
    riding into sunsets
    never to part..

    But life is real,
    a beginning, an end..
    Sadness looms
    in corners in rooms.
    Wicked at it's core
    never less is more..

    Smiling faces, weeping eyes,
    masks worn with no despise..
    Cheating, lying,
    dying, freaking..
    All surviving
    all still breathing.

    And in this chaos
    known as life
    Restless peace unknown.
    Facing monsters,
    conquering demons.
    Dealing with death,
    madness and weakness..

    I found a strength
    to fight it all.
    Baring my soul
    to play so foul.
    In this nightmare
    a greedy display,
    I found a match
    to call my own..

    So, I wrote this poem..
    No fairies, princes,
    ogres or spinsters.
    Just this,
    me deep from the soul..
     
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  16. ClassyCass

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    Silent Masterpiece

    Gestures, painted in air
    Picasso, extraordinaire
    Distorted faces
    wasting away
    lips keeping silent
    emotions so violent

    In all this time
    spent looking at me..
    How is it that you cannot see?
    Colours, a mixture
    of waters and oil..
    Completing this picture
    perfect, unspoiled..

    Symphony to deaf
    mimic to blind
    That's how you experience
    a masterpiece of art.
    Complex with texture,
    colours and warmth
    Applied with perfection
    look deeper, not hard..

    Listen to her speak,
    silent face on canvas.
    Trying to breach,
    feelings, it's endless.
    Feel her eyes,
    see her need..
    To utter I love you,
    in silence indeed!
     
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  17. ClassyCass

    ClassyCass Guest


    This made me quite sad. Its so beautiful ❤️
     
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  18. imursecretbaby

    imursecretbaby Well-Known Member

    I was posting in the writing thread. But I guess my stuff belongs here.
    @blaze1990 yours.


    My love for you grows
    As our days become one
    Our heart melds
    Bodies yearning to be touched
    Freeing our minds,
    Opening our hearts
    The light shines through.
    Filling the darkness
    Our souls embrace the light
    Our bodies as one
    Our souls embrace
    Our hearts beat again.
    Our eyes smile.
     
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  19. blaze1990

    blaze1990 Guest

    Awwww babe! Amazing! ... Nope wasnt wipeing tears away xD haha

    Xoxo
     
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