Its lovely thank you for sharing
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Lupine
Guest
Pleasure, glad you enjoyed it.
I have struggle
I have fall
I was lost
I was weak
I was broken
You lift my burden
Stop me falling
Fight me back
Give me new strenght
Pick up the broken pieces
Give me wings
Set me free
Tell me to live
Force me to be better
Make me brave
And now I fly ... because of you
I have fall
I was lost
I was weak
I was broken
You lift my burden
Stop me falling
Fight me back
Give me new strenght
Pick up the broken pieces
Give me wings
Set me free
Tell me to live
Force me to be better
Make me brave
And now I fly ... because of you
Hate is such a strong emotion friend let it go there is others that will make you love you
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Lupine
Guest
Nice, the only thing I'd say is perhaps change the word force. It flows so nice and gentle, but force gives a feeling of unwillingness which the rest of the poem doesn't have. Maybe use Help instead?
Phenomenal Woman
By Maya Angelou
Pretty women wonder where my secret lies.
I'm not cute or built to suit a fashion model's size
But when I start to tell them,
They think I'm telling lies.
I say,
It's in the reach of my arms
The span of my hips,
The stride of my step,
The curl of my lips.
I'm a woman
Phenomenally.
Phenomenal woman,
That's me.
I walk into a room
Just as cool as you please,
And to a man,
The fellows stand or
Fall down on their knees.
Then they swarm around me,
A hive of honey bees.
I say,
It's the fire in my eyes,
And the flash of my teeth,
The swing in my waist,
And the joy in my feet.
I'm a woman
Phenomenally.
Phenomenal woman,
That's me.
Men themselves have wondered
What they see in me.
They try so much
But they can't touch
My inner mystery.
When I try to show them
They say they still can't see.
I say,
It's in the arch of my back,
The sun of my smile,
The ride of my breasts,
The grace of my style.
I'm a woman
Phenomenally.
Phenomenal woman,
That's me.
Now you understand
Just why my head's not bowed.
I don't shout or jump about
Or have to talk real loud.
When you see me passing
It ought to make you proud.
I say,
It's in the click of my heels,
The bend of my hair,
the palm of my hand,
The need of my care,
'Cause I'm a woman
Phenomenally.
Phenomenal woman,
That's me.
@Jinxy
@CrystalMarker @AngieOttawa47 @AmandaFlirty @WomanOnTop @FallenFreya @nessabbyxo and to all the other woman on here you a Phenomenal Woman !!!
By Maya Angelou
Pretty women wonder where my secret lies.
I'm not cute or built to suit a fashion model's size
But when I start to tell them,
They think I'm telling lies.
I say,
It's in the reach of my arms
The span of my hips,
The stride of my step,
The curl of my lips.
I'm a woman
Phenomenally.
Phenomenal woman,
That's me.
I walk into a room
Just as cool as you please,
And to a man,
The fellows stand or
Fall down on their knees.
Then they swarm around me,
A hive of honey bees.
I say,
It's the fire in my eyes,
And the flash of my teeth,
The swing in my waist,
And the joy in my feet.
I'm a woman
Phenomenally.
Phenomenal woman,
That's me.
Men themselves have wondered
What they see in me.
They try so much
But they can't touch
My inner mystery.
When I try to show them
They say they still can't see.
I say,
It's in the arch of my back,
The sun of my smile,
The ride of my breasts,
The grace of my style.
I'm a woman
Phenomenally.
Phenomenal woman,
That's me.
Now you understand
Just why my head's not bowed.
I don't shout or jump about
Or have to talk real loud.
When you see me passing
It ought to make you proud.
I say,
It's in the click of my heels,
The bend of my hair,
the palm of my hand,
The need of my care,
'Cause I'm a woman
Phenomenally.
Phenomenal woman,
That's me.
@Jinxy
@CrystalMarker @AngieOttawa47 @AmandaFlirty @WomanOnTop @FallenFreya @nessabbyxo and to all the other woman on here you a Phenomenal Woman !!!
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Pistil
Guest
So cool. Ever listen to her read it?
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Pistil
Guest
nah - that is real poetry man. It's a moving target. All good.
P
Pistil
Guest
Sing
Worn and scratchy records of the past
keep us spinning in their old refrains,
stuck in the pops and skips and hiss
of the same sad hurtful melodies.
Lift the needle from those tired tracks
to claim the composition of your life.
What is the one true song—yours alone—
that gives your heart impulse to beat?
Sing into creation your soulful tune,
for those who long to hear your song
Worn and scratchy records of the past
keep us spinning in their old refrains,
stuck in the pops and skips and hiss
of the same sad hurtful melodies.
Lift the needle from those tired tracks
to claim the composition of your life.
What is the one true song—yours alone—
that gives your heart impulse to beat?
Sing into creation your soulful tune,
for those who long to hear your song
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Pistil
Guest
chiasmus
it’s not in the words this magic
poetry is only the form over naked being
as being neither noun nor verb
but the dissolving of duality
in the magic of vanishing forms
your hands caressing my metaphor
my curves long lines belly wrists eyelashes
caesura body opening to body to chiasmus
the magic in the moment of that movement
the caress that carries in the oh so delicate
minute distance between our lips
that one trembling word
the naming of the divine desire
that makes love manifest
in the moment of vanishing forms
it’s not in the words this magic
poetry is only the form over naked being
as being neither noun nor verb
but the dissolving of duality
in the magic of vanishing forms
your hands caressing my metaphor
my curves long lines belly wrists eyelashes
caesura body opening to body to chiasmus
the magic in the moment of that movement
the caress that carries in the oh so delicate
minute distance between our lips
that one trembling word
the naming of the divine desire
that makes love manifest
in the moment of vanishing forms
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Pistil
Guest
the rhyme of your rhythms
(for Her)(here)(with gratitude)
anytime I curve the way of your rhymes
the rhythm in your lines requires me
to say no to no and yes to knowing
the sweet ways of your arcing into me
every time I seek the silence of your ways
the rhythm of your rhymes requires me
to say yes to you and yes and yes
and go forward in your ways
over this dreamwater of desire
I will make a constellation of kisses
to be flung into the edges of bending light
everywhere I curve the way of you
you have given me the form of myself
a shadow of love guiding me across a sea
(for Her)(here)(with gratitude)
anytime I curve the way of your rhymes
the rhythm in your lines requires me
to say no to no and yes to knowing
the sweet ways of your arcing into me
every time I seek the silence of your ways
the rhythm of your rhymes requires me
to say yes to you and yes and yes
and go forward in your ways
over this dreamwater of desire
I will make a constellation of kisses
to be flung into the edges of bending light
everywhere I curve the way of you
you have given me the form of myself
a shadow of love guiding me across a sea
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Pistil
Guest
way cool. still working on the translation. it's well worth it. thanks.
P
Pistil
Guest
He Her Here
Words are still all they have
to consummate what’s
consuming them.
Yet there is so much more of them
to find in the blank spaces
left between words.
Things that go unsaid because
for some things words are
no longer needed.
And though their story is yet to
meet its end, it will always remain
unfinished--one of someone so close
in a different time and in a different space.
Words are still all they have
to consummate what’s
consuming them.
Yet there is so much more of them
to find in the blank spaces
left between words.
Things that go unsaid because
for some things words are
no longer needed.
And though their story is yet to
meet its end, it will always remain
unfinished--one of someone so close
in a different time and in a different space.
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HideousAttraction
Guest
I find this to be one of the most underrated threads on this site.
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Pistil
Guest
Love to have more sharing here - so many thoughtful creative articulate ones out there.
To all the Woman out there
You Are Beautiful
You are beautiful
No matter your size, skin color, religion or sexuality
Don't ever let anyone doubt that
Life would be boring without diversity
You are beautiful
and the lenght of your dress tonight doesn't justify anyone calling you a **** nor gives them permission to grab your tight
Only you can give them consent
And remember to say no is your right
You are beautiful
wear those strechmarks with pride
They are perfectly normal and natural
Don't look at them as flaws
Your body is a miracle that you don't need to hide
You are beautiful
-Rosecolourredpoet
@Jinxy @WomanOnTop @CrystalMarker @SnoopSlimes @LilithX @IvY @AngieOttawa47 @Misha000 and too all the other woman
You Are Beautiful
You are beautiful
No matter your size, skin color, religion or sexuality
Don't ever let anyone doubt that
Life would be boring without diversity
You are beautiful
and the lenght of your dress tonight doesn't justify anyone calling you a **** nor gives them permission to grab your tight
Only you can give them consent
And remember to say no is your right
You are beautiful
wear those strechmarks with pride
They are perfectly normal and natural
Don't look at them as flaws
Your body is a miracle that you don't need to hide
You are beautiful
-Rosecolourredpoet
@Jinxy @WomanOnTop @CrystalMarker @SnoopSlimes @LilithX @IvY @AngieOttawa47 @Misha000 and too all the other woman