Poetry Poetry

Discussion in 'Film, Music, Literature, Art' started by Lupine, Aug 3, 2017.

  1. xxkittyxx

    xxkittyxx New Member

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    i love this!
     
  2. Curvy

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    I won a writing competition once with a poem.

    Now what did I bloody do with it?!
     
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  3. Lupine

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    Found it yet :p
     
  4. Curvy

    Curvy Guest

    I actually threw it away ten or more years ago, when I wanted to say goodbye to a part of me. A very foolish thing. Remember some of it. Should try and rewrite it. It was called Silence in Monochrome.
     
  5. Lupine

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    I think we all do that, as in throw stuff away because we don't think it's us anymore.

    If you have the time and inclination, then why not see if you can redo it.
     
  6. Curvy

    Curvy Guest

    I regretted the act, and never quite got round to fixing it. So I think I will try and rewrite it. Thank you for giving me the motivation x
     
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  7. Lupine

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    I look forward to reading it. Hope you enjoy rediscovering it..
     
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  8. Curvy

    Curvy Guest

    So do I!
     
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  9. RustyGuy

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    I’ve got so much written stuff it’d take me a week to post it all up! Lol
     
  10. TheRachel

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    Love it! Thanks for this thread, can't wait to read more!
     
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  11. TheRachel

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    No way! It was beautiful, I personally loved it. Don't stop creating things your way!
     
  12. TheRachel

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    Very true on your part as well but consider it's art and if it pleases just one person then it's beautiful in their eyes. Not every one should fit into one mold . . Today I might write a triangle which triangles would love but tomorrow I might write a square so . . .lol funny way of putting it but you get what I mean?? Right?
     
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  13. TheRachel

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    Same here, I have notebooks full of random stuff only a few I have considered finished.
     
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  14. BobbyF

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    Leonard Cohen
    Come Healing

    O gather up the brokenness
    And bring it to me now
    The fragrance of those promises
    You never dared to vow
    The splinters that you carry
    The cross you left behind
    Come healing of the body
    Come healing of the heart

    O let the heavens hear it
    The penitential hymn
    Come healing of the spirit
    Come healing of the limb
     
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  15. TheRachel

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    Curvy, girl I would love to read it! :) Don't give it up ;)
     
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  16. TheRachel

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    The Way I'm Feeling

    The way I'm feeling, unexplained
    Undefined,
    Uncontrollable like a ball rolling down a hill until . .
    I hit a wall.
    Crashing, crumbling into pieces.
    A brittle mistake wanting to just bounce again
    Pick me up and mold me into a new shape
    The way I'm feeling . . . Maybe a square
    Then I could fit inside the box you hide in
    Somehow I know there won't be room
    Anyway, I curl up into myself staying true to form . . .
    The way I'm feeling, an uncompromised ball.


    Lol :D I never change
     
  17. Curvy

    Curvy Guest

    Thank you TheRachel... Already trying to restore it in my mind’s eye. I am older now... So it is already looking very different. Much love...x
     
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  18. Autonomous

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    This really is poetry, musical poetry, though a story.
     
  19. SweetLesGirl

    SweetLesGirl Well-Known Member FCN Regular

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    This is for my BFF in FCN - English is not my first or second so forgive the mistakes... :)

    We where strangers

    Passing by each others

    Catch on to a funny moment

    Then the joyride start

    Careful feel feel in words

    Testing the waters

    And then as if the moment was right

    2 souls touch over a distance

    In a journey of words

    You become part of me

    My days are empty

    When we dont say hi

    When emotion overwelm me

    You there

    When its dark

    You there

    When i am in pain

    You there

    You dried my tears

    Slap me when i am silly

    Took my hand and lead me

    Too happiness

    You made me laugh

    When my heart is torn

    You give me strenght

    To face reality

    You are a special kind of special

    You bring to me sunshine

    You fill me with joy

    You my favorite online friend

    You just fit into my heart

    Because you my ANGEL my save place
     

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